Glenn Smith - That Smell- Sydney

[RossRadiation]

Posting this for Glenn Smith, it's an eight pager

Ross

[STiKMAN]

wow, there's some great detail in this!

[Pirotess]

I always wondered how your stuff would look when done in a hurry. Especially love the last panel - you can't really tell how much beer you've had

[Patrick Alexander]

I see you suffer from 24-hour comic syndrome. "Building a story, building a story... pretty tired... building a story... Ah, fuck it -- here's how the rest of it was gonna go." ^_^

Nice work! Odd but easy to read.

[mark selan]

its kind of like in primary school during creative writing classes, when you'd only have another 2 minutes to go, so you'd write "and then the world blew up"

i liked the build for this, hopefully it gets expanded and finsihed somewhere

[tonia]

"Stay away from the sushi district" - heh! I'd like to see where it was going too.

[Gary Lau]

Glenn, cool stuff. The ending was totally abrupt but at least you ended it. Enjoyed!

[LaMiel]

Nice work Glenn... I especially enjoyed the dream sequence and your making a guest appearance. Please tell me that Ben the character was NOT modeled after the Ben whose company you enjoyed during the challenge. If so...you are totally right on about his love of sushi... but completely missed the sensualness and smooth Casanova-ness that he exudes.

[jing]

Hah, this was very much enjoyable, yes. Especially the guy with the cleaver. Cleavers make my happy, they do. yup.

[Owen Heitmann]

"Unresolved childhood conundrum" indeed.

Although I appreciate the fact that you at least gave it an ending of sorts, I was really getting wrapped up in what was happening, and very sad to see it conclude so abruptly.