Declan O'Leary, Ash, Melbourne ; FINISHED

[Rich_n_Creamy]

I'm starting now, 7.52pm.

[Rich_n_Creamy]

[H PoP]

For a simple story, the storytelling is very well conveived. I liked how you tell a story in loose sequence, and add that little twist right at the end.

[Patrick Alexander]

I had to re-read it a couple of times, but, neato! Your art has the correct blend of real-looking-ness and cartoony-ness to be just exactly slightly disconcerting.

Personally, I would take a good toaster over a diamond ring any day.

[mark selan]

i think its cool how the pages are sort of mixed up out of linear order but trying to figure where page 2 fits in the time line.

But cool presentation and nice style

[Pirotess]

Wow. Your style is really quirky and the story's just weird enough to have made me reread this a few times. You draw pretty fucking incredible shoes, too.

[Gary Lau]

Wow, that's really surreal to read for the first time. Your art style is really cool, kinda twised and cartoony. I also like the non-linear story-telling and the reveal at the end there.

Two thumbs up!!

[tonia]

Neat little story - did you draw it in blue or did you change it in Photoshop?

[just some chick]

....oooh, i get it now. i had to read it a few times too. wow, really cool way of sequencing it, and the lack of text really makes you look at the artwork and understand what's hapenning. awesome work :O

[sid]

Maybe she felt putting metal into a toaster she could have plugged into mains a safety hazard and got cranky.

[thistler]

Neat little story - did you draw it in blue or did you change it in Photoshop?

It was all done in blue. I didn't have any black fine-liners left for Dec to use. It was an awesome job seeing as he only came over to keep me company while I did the challenge.

[Stephen Bai]

Now how will she make toast?

[Caleb]

OMG! i just got it! after about 2 days of trying. Wow. That's kind of tragic. In a really subtle way. Me likee verry much. VERY MUCH.

[Owen Heitmann]

I think the blue inks work really well, which I was surprised at.

At first my reaction was: nice art, but I don't get it. THEN I GOT IT! Yes. Non linear. Smart. (Although, like Mark, I don't quite see where page 2 fits in.)