Henry PoP This is my thread. I forgot to log avi off

Forum for the 2005 OzComics 24 Hour Challenge. (ARCHIVED - READ ONLY)

Henry PoP This is my thread. I forgot to log avi off

Postby H PoP on Sat Jun 11, 2005 8:56 pm

My stuff:

Image

Image

Image

Image
User avatar
H PoP
Super Genius
 
Posts: 220
Joined: Mon Nov 29, 2004 3:39 pm

Postby practicecactus on Sat Jun 11, 2005 9:03 pm

wow, interesting stuff..
User avatar
practicecactus
Destroyer of Worlds
 
Posts: 1510
Joined: Wed Nov 24, 2004 6:27 pm
Location: Gold Coast

Postby SpectralAesthete on Sat Jun 11, 2005 11:01 pm

<3 most awesome work, man.
User avatar
SpectralAesthete
Superhero
 
Posts: 153
Joined: Wed May 11, 2005 10:22 pm
Location: VIC

Postby H PoP on Sun Jun 12, 2005 12:10 am

Image

Image
User avatar
H PoP
Super Genius
 
Posts: 220
Joined: Mon Nov 29, 2004 3:39 pm

Postby XiaoLi on Sun Jun 12, 2005 2:31 am

Ooh, it's getting dark... Interesting...
User avatar
XiaoLi
Superhero
 
Posts: 115
Joined: Tue Mar 15, 2005 9:49 pm

Postby Kenny on Sun Jun 12, 2005 2:23 pm

Continue this or I will hunt you down and break your shin with my long stick, Henry. :D
Kenny
Superhero
 
Posts: 99
Joined: Fri Jun 10, 2005 12:22 am

Postby H PoP on Sun Jun 12, 2005 2:33 pm

Done and done. Not a moment too soon. Half an hour left too. ^__^ I copped out by only doing 10 pages, but the damn story was a fuckin' bitch (not to mention that I slacked off yesterday ;) ). No one point out the grammatical mistakes. :P

Image

Image

Image

Image
User avatar
H PoP
Super Genius
 
Posts: 220
Joined: Mon Nov 29, 2004 3:39 pm

Postby Kenny on Sun Jun 12, 2005 2:43 pm

Whoa. When you described it, it sounded good, but now it's GREAT! Love the ending.
Kenny
Superhero
 
Posts: 99
Joined: Fri Jun 10, 2005 12:22 am

Postby H PoP on Sun Jun 12, 2005 2:43 pm

PracticeCactus: Thanks mate ^__^

Wen: Thankies :D

Michael: Yep. I don't think I'll ever get to do a light hearted comic without turning it dark. :P

Kenny: Yeah, yeah. I finished it! Not as many pages as I'd have liked, but it's enough for the story. Hell, I was running dry already. ;P

Thank you. T'was a pain in the arse, but I'm glad you liked the story. :D
User avatar
H PoP
Super Genius
 
Posts: 220
Joined: Mon Nov 29, 2004 3:39 pm

Postby Pirotess on Mon Jun 13, 2005 3:44 pm

That was excellent! The extra work on your story really showed, too. :D
Komala Singh

Hayase! | Twitter | LiveJournal
User avatar
Pirotess
Super Genius
 
Posts: 392
Joined: Tue Nov 30, 2004 7:29 pm
Location: Sydney, AU

Postby H PoP on Mon Jun 13, 2005 7:40 pm

XDDD Thank you Miss Pirotess! *bows*
User avatar
H PoP
Super Genius
 
Posts: 220
Joined: Mon Nov 29, 2004 3:39 pm

Postby Patrick Alexander on Mon Jun 13, 2005 7:55 pm

I like it! And it's interesting seeing your work in pencil -- quite a contrast with your bold, sharp finished work.

A suggestion, if you ever turn this into a 'real' comic: drop the narration from the first panel of the second-last page.
User avatar
Patrick Alexander
Superhero
 
Posts: 137
Joined: Sun Feb 06, 2005 6:40 pm
Location: Sydney

Postby H PoP on Mon Jun 13, 2005 8:11 pm

Thanks! LOL. Yeah, pencil work is a little unrefined, as I ussually do detail when I ink. :D

I was thinking of expanding this and redoing the entire thing. This is pretty much how I layout my comics. You're right about that dialogue. It's pretty bad, and obvious. I didn't think much of it until you mentioned it. Thanks for pointing it out. :)
User avatar
H PoP
Super Genius
 
Posts: 220
Joined: Mon Nov 29, 2004 3:39 pm

Postby XiaoLi on Mon Jun 13, 2005 8:14 pm

Just wondering, where does "Anita Damage" come from?
User avatar
XiaoLi
Superhero
 
Posts: 115
Joined: Tue Mar 15, 2005 9:49 pm

Postby H PoP on Mon Jun 13, 2005 8:20 pm

It's actually Anita "Danger." Ugh. I have bad handwriting :\ the "danger" part is like from all those pulp heros of the first half of the 20th century. It sounded niftty :P

Made her up. I kinda thought that a boy haveing a female role model would add something different to the typical norm idol. I based what she looks like off that actress from "a very long engagement"/"amilie" and Natalie Portman. :)
User avatar
H PoP
Super Genius
 
Posts: 220
Joined: Mon Nov 29, 2004 3:39 pm

Next

Return to OzComics 24 Hr Challenge 2005

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 0 guests

cron
Friends of Pulp Faction: