Alec Maclachlan, The Blue Bolt, Melbourne

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Alec Maclachlan, The Blue Bolt, Melbourne

Postby neilmac on Sat Jun 11, 2005 5:15 pm

Page 1 for Alec......late "start" due to Dad's lack of technical knowhow!

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Postby mark selan on Sat Jun 11, 2005 5:33 pm

pretty good, keep it up.
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Alec Maclachlan, The Blue Bolt, Melbourne

Postby neilmac on Sat Jun 11, 2005 5:42 pm

Alec's 12 years old.........Dad's just OLD!

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Postby neilmac on Sat Jun 11, 2005 5:44 pm

Alec: My comic is pretty corny!

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Postby neilmac on Sat Jun 11, 2005 5:52 pm

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Postby mark selan on Sat Jun 11, 2005 6:08 pm

you got it working - cool - nice work
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Postby alwaysmerryandbright on Sun Jun 12, 2005 11:35 am

Nice work Alec. Can't wait to see more...
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Postby Owen Heitmann on Sun Jun 12, 2005 7:40 pm

I'm not a fan of superheroes, but there's some nice panels in there - I wish my art had been that strong when I was 12!

The switch from inked pencils to just pencils works fine as well. In fact, the pencils by themselves actually look cleaner.
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Postby Troy Kealley on Mon Jun 13, 2005 12:29 am

Nice work Alec, you definately have potential there. Keep it up!
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Postby mark selan on Mon Jun 13, 2005 1:46 pm

You have a really good sense of story telling and composition for someone just starting out - and that profile panel in page 6 is really good (except for the ear buts ears i gather are hard)

Work on you anatomy and stick with pencils for now. And keep it up.

and you did a good job alec's dad
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