Space shift - Olivia Ta (MANGA) - FINISHED

[exifer]

Hi this is my first time here X_x didn't realise i have to start the thread when i start drawing.... nooo...

well i hope i can still post this anyway even if i'm not eligible for anything (i highly doubt i will win anytthing XD). I started at 3.30 pm yesterday and i'm just scanning my artwork now...

[exifer]

K here we go 16 pages... and lack of camera angles ^^;;

[exifer]

done.. my neck is killing me XD

[poshua]

Hahaha Oli XD It's so cute ~~!! (looks like... Clamp and Card Captor Sakura to me??)

Congrat on finishing 24 pages XD!!*Dance*

[exifer]

X_x i still haven't managed to shake my CLAMP ness.... i didn't mean the characters to look the way they do... only realised this on the middle of the manga XD and no i'm onlyy doing 16 pgs not 24

not strong enough

[Pirotess]

Ahh, this was so cute! The Clamp-ness is there but definitely not in a bad way.

Inventing camera angles is tricky in a 24 hour comic, so I think you did a fine job on the angles you did use.

[SB]

hmm yeah I can see the CLAMPness there too, but it was very cute Great expressions, love that exploded face of the proffesor guy. And angles were great too ...one day I also hope to draw an angle @__@

Great work!

[practicecactus]

I'm not a big fan of manga but this was really lovely. Nice and playful.
Very dream like.

[Chuc]

Hehe, awesome job with it all
I really liked the action sequence with the bomb exploding in shaft 17~

[onegreyelephant]

woot! great work! I'd say you got a hell of alotta camera angles in there-- the bomb sequence was really quite dramatic.

[Li'l Sketchy]

Yeah, this is great! Great clarity on the whole thing... Consistent characters, great layouts and pacing... just a really neat story!

[hannijules]

Sweet. I like the kind of Manga that's not all Gundam's and Angels and Giant robots destroying Tokyo.
I like the dreamy stuff - like Haibane Renmei (though this wasn't much like that).
Got a kind of Alternate Universe 'Casper' thing from it though. Weird.

Was really cool though. Cute stuff.

[Egofreaky]

Good stuff...
And there's no shame in CLAMPing your art style. It's pretty much become a Shoujo standard. I mean, there's a reason they're so popular, and from what I've read, it can't be the stories

Good stuff. Hope to se some more of your work sometime soon.

[exifer]

waah thanks for all the comments. it's good to hear some encouraging words

[Gary Lau]

Hey Olivia,

That was a really cute story. I think Batsu is cute but I don't know about that that he smell like cheese... hope it's not parmesan, coz that's stinky! Great stuff!!