This was just great. It reminds me of some of the old Dizney Comix you used to see at Polyester.
If only the guy he glassed looked like Mickey Mouse, it would have made my day heheh
There's something you gotta find hilarious about cute furry (or feathered) animals doing greivous bodily harm to each other. And with the narration...gold.
I kinda wanted to see Fighty McFightington (great name!) lose, because he comes across as a bit of an asshole. "Might makes right, fight fight fight" etc. But despite that, it's a well done piece about bare knuckle / bear claw boxing.
And yeah, I didn't have enough time, space, or talent to get across just how much of a dick the bear's suposed to be.
If you read it again and keep in mind that the bear's a major bastard and has been in need of an ass kicking for years, then it'll come across like I'd intended.