Wow, that's really impressive. So simple and direct - constructing a great vignette out of almost nothing but the three insert words. I could really see a cleaned up version of this working in an anthology - and given the absence of dialogue, it would work equally well printed in any language!
Heh, awesome! The hand work was really good too. Wish I could draw hands that well.
Does anyone else reckon this'd make a cool video clip starring Christopher Walkin?