I just thought I'd put up my thread, get a spot early, but I'm jusy waiting a few minutes till 11.
I know the words are up but I don't wanna look untill 11 on the dot, then I'll get goin.
Obviously I have nothing planned, but I know I won't be using Mojo & Fuzz like I have previous years. I wanna do something with people. Couple of minutes left, gonna que up some music and it'll be time by then..
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by practicecactus on Sat Jun 09, 2007 11:58 am
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by practicecactus on Sat Jun 09, 2007 1:28 pm
Page One.
I was hoping to do 24 pages, but at this rate I'm already running behind.
And yes, I know she redied her clenched right fist but punched with her left.
I was hoping to do 24 pages, but at this rate I'm already running behind.
And yes, I know she redied her clenched right fist but punched with her left.
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by practicecactus on Sat Jun 09, 2007 2:42 pm
Page Two.
Cheers guys.
Man, it's messy. They look sloppy. I'm hurrying but I don't think I'll make 24 seeing as how it's now it's been 2 hours 40 and I've only doen two pages. Might need to do some splash pages..
or I might shoot for 16.
Cheers guys.
Man, it's messy. They look sloppy. I'm hurrying but I don't think I'll make 24 seeing as how it's now it's been 2 hours 40 and I've only doen two pages. Might need to do some splash pages..
or I might shoot for 16.
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by practicecactus on Sat Jun 09, 2007 4:09 pm
Page Three.
I gotta stop doing finickey panels.
I think it's time for some more talking. And maybe some plot developement...sure, why not.
I gotta stop doing finickey panels.
I think it's time for some more talking. And maybe some plot developement...sure, why not.
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by practicecactus on Sat Jun 09, 2007 5:14 pm
Page Four.
ugh, I'm really struggling.
Not fishing for compliments here, but I really am over it already.
I can't keep up on time and I'm not happy with it at all.
I dunno where to go with it.
ugh, I'm really struggling.
Not fishing for compliments here, but I really am over it already.
I can't keep up on time and I'm not happy with it at all.
I dunno where to go with it.
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by Troy Kealley on Sat Jun 09, 2007 5:30 pm
Keep it up man - (awesome to see the mighty Valiant make an appearance 
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This is the start of a good road trip story - just work with the basics - you got the intro down, starting into the buildup. Work out what the confrontation will be, the resolution, and wind down to a conclusion. If you break it down like that you cant go wrong. I'll probably get some 'pro' writers slamming that but it works for me!
The characters are building a good dynamic already (I'm thinking you've borrowed from some mutual freinds here ;D) - I think that can develop to cement the story regardless of happens around them.
Good luck!
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This is the start of a good road trip story - just work with the basics - you got the intro down, starting into the buildup. Work out what the confrontation will be, the resolution, and wind down to a conclusion. If you break it down like that you cant go wrong. I'll probably get some 'pro' writers slamming that but it works for me!
The characters are building a good dynamic already (I'm thinking you've borrowed from some mutual freinds here ;D) - I think that can develop to cement the story regardless of happens around them.
Good luck!
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by practicecactus on Sat Jun 09, 2007 6:56 pm
Page Five.
I think I know where to go with this.
seeing as I've now included all three things, I'm gonna go ahead and try to make it more interesting...here's hoping anyway.
I think I know where to go with this.
seeing as I've now included all three things, I'm gonna go ahead and try to make it more interesting...here's hoping anyway.
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by practicecactus on Sat Jun 09, 2007 7:52 pm
Page Six.
Ok, I got an angle. Sorry for the rushed look, But I don;t wanna dawdle on pages and if I'm taking too long on it, I start to hurry.
Ok, I got an angle. Sorry for the rushed look, But I don;t wanna dawdle on pages and if I'm taking too long on it, I start to hurry.
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by practicecactus on Sat Jun 09, 2007 8:30 pm
Page Seven
Struggling again. Might take a break and eat something.
Struggling again. Might take a break and eat something.
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