Erin McGregor - To Make it Breathe - Adelaide [MANGA]=Finish

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Erin McGregor - To Make it Breathe - Adelaide [MANGA]=Finish

Postby Washi on Sat Jun 10, 2006 12:00 pm

Good morning ladies and gentlement. It's 10:30 here in Adelaide, the sun has made a brief appearance and it's time for the 24-hour comic to start!

As you can see in the title, this comic is likely to contain themes that may offend some viewers - namely a Manga style - so concider yourself warned, and enjoy! Title's will come when I work out what the hell I'm gonna do.

Pages will be posted in 4-page increments.

EDIT
Because I had some time spare, a cover got done. Enjoy :D

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Postby Washi on Sat Jun 10, 2006 7:15 pm

First four pages!

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Time behind schedule: 3 hours.
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Postby Washi on Sat Jun 10, 2006 11:28 pm

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Behind schedule: 2.5 hours
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Postby Thocar on Sat Jun 10, 2006 11:43 pm

I'm liking this story, it has got a sort of charm to it. Plus the art is pretty slick too.

I'd like to see what mysterious world our young protagonist is pulled into. I'm guessing something with some fantasy.
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Postby Washi on Sun Jun 11, 2006 3:14 am

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Time Behind: 3 hours
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Postby mark selan on Sun Jun 11, 2006 3:41 am

This is sweet polished stuff, i'm really enjoying it
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Postby Washi on Sun Jun 11, 2006 5:58 am

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Time Behind: 2 hours
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Postby maggie on Sun Jun 11, 2006 6:01 am

Great work, Erin! Keep it up. :)
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Postby Washi on Sun Jun 11, 2006 8:24 am

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Time behind: 20 minutes
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Postby Washi on Sun Jun 11, 2006 8:42 am

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Postby Washi on Sun Jun 11, 2006 9:25 am

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Progress: Well on time.
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Postby Washi on Sun Jun 11, 2006 10:08 am

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Completed with 1 hour and 50 minutes spare.

Casualties:
Two grey markers may be in intensive for a while.
My spelling.

Bizzare developments:
The man in the glasses was dubbed 'The Body Corporate' during the production of this comic. No-one can remember how it happened.
The main character's name is Sean. It never came up.
The astronaut was officially dubbed 'too friendly'.
I managed to include all saturday's items! That's my personal challenge met :D
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Postby Timothy Raven on Sun Jun 11, 2006 10:31 am

Came from behind but finished ahead. Great job Erin. Really enjoyed your story.
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Postby maggie on Sun Jun 11, 2006 10:31 am

*applause*
Good job, Erin!
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Postby jacen_c on Sun Jun 11, 2006 10:38 am

This story will certainly be passed on and on. Good work
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