Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

[robobop]

Hey everyone,

Here's the first 3 pages of a short story (9 page effort) comic called Jikininki, based on a Japanese ghost story. This is my first effort and I really want to improve so I would love some crits - don't hold back, I can take it! Anyway I nearly finished, so expect the rest of it very soon.

page 1

p2

p3

Cheers,
ROB

[robobop]

OK here are pages 4-6. Only 3 more pages to go!

p4

p5

p6

[Dean Rankine]

These are great! I'm intrigued (And hanging to see how the story turns out).

[jpaulos]

I agree, can't wait to see more!

[robobop]

Thanks for the interest guys! It's actually finished except for some panels on the next page (7). Trying to figure out how to make people talking interesting... I find Dave McKean is a master of making me hang onto every panel.
Will post very soon!

[robobop]

OK I was able to finish it!
Here are the last 3 pages....
(Crits most welcome!)

p7

p8

p9

[Dean Rankine]

Well done! Fascinating story. You should pimp it around to a local anthology.

[robobop]

Thanks Dean!
I'd love to put it into a local anthology. I'll look around. Do you know any?

[Dean Rankine]

No. I've been a bit out of the loop these days. You might get some joy if you post a thread asking what's around. Or go to the Melbourne comic meet-up as another option.

[Frank Candiloro]

[robobop]

Hey Frank,
Thanks so much for the link. I just sent them an email so hopefully it all goes well.

[Paul Bedford]

Really nice work, Robo. Congrats!

Oh and... MORE! MOOORRE!

[BMB]

A lovely read!

[robobop]

Thanks for all the comments everyone. I'm working on some new stuff so there will be more!
And I'll bring some to the meetup next time..