CraigVial - Sydney - The Smiling Assasin -16 Pages-FINISHED!

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[Craig Vial]

And that's that! Just sixteen pages this year. That'll have to do. I should probably go and look and comment on everyone else's efforts, but it's time for some sleep.

I'll be back.

[LauraSeabrook]

Well done.

[maggie]

*applause*

[jacen_c]

Great work Craig. Your dialogue for the "interview" was very free flowing and realistic. And congrats on the first soccer (football) comic.

[jing]

Best lines:

"struck by an existential crisis"
"Ah! you do have eyes!"

^_^ I nearly didn't read it because it's a sports comic -- glad I came to my senses and didn't miss out. I agree with Jacen, the interview dialogue was spot on.

Well done for making me overcome my dumb preconceptions to enjoy a sports comic. That's quite an achievement!

[mconnollyz]

Great story, very witty
I was a bit worried at the beginning as it was about sport
but was soon laughing out loud.
Well done!

[Tsumi]

What big eyes he has! That bit had me in stitches. Your comic has put me in the mood for the World Cup! ^_^

[Troy Kealley]

Finally had a chance to read this through - that was great

[felabba]

Bwahaha! The "Pablo Pantsdown" was excellent! Nice finish, I really enjoyed reading this.

[Craig Vial]

[scarlett]

that was fantastic. Just because I'm not a sports fan, I wasn't expecting much when I started reading, and then I was completely thrown off balance with: he was suddenly struck by an existential crisis "Ack! It's all so absurd!"

and it finished really well too! well done

edit, what's with the : D smiley??