Luke Pickett -Angry Sarah Adventure!-Central Vic- *finished*

[fox.django]

Start Time 11.30
Words: Skin, Quieter, Police

Pages Soon!

[Brendan Halyday]

thanks luke! Best of luck to you too man!

[fox.django]

First Three pages! its not the greatest thing i've ever drawn, but i trying a new style out. Been reading allot of glister by Andi Watson lately. more soon!

[Brendan Halyday]

nice start luke. keep it coming. Now if only i could get past this dreaded writers block...

[Pauk]

Those are all my favourite muted colours! It's like you reached into my brain-meats and stole my personal colour scheme... well done sir. It's shaping up nicely.

[fox.django]

thanks guys i figure I'll just edit in the new pages, that way there all in the same place. so pages 4 and 5 are new check'em out!

[fox.django]

Page 6 is done! i think the next couple should be a little quicker, hopefully least.

[fox.django]

page 7!

[fox.django]

all pages up! had to cut a little of the story but i think it worked out alright, had time to go back and redo page 1 as well so that's was alright. it was a new style for me, and i think i grew into quite well.

[emma-jeans]

I really like the style - and love the way the colour and shape of the word balloons and writing add to the story/characterisations.

emmajeans

[Egofreaky]

That was something pretty special...
Going to develop this one at all? Or just leave it where it is?

[Owen Heitmann]

I like the art - it's clear and easy to follow even without panel borders. But the conclusion to the story pretty much left me with a similar reaction to Bridee.

[fox.django]

@emma-jeans
why thankyou, it just kinda seemed like a good idea, glad you like it

@Egofreaky
I think I might try and develop it, i don't really consider myself much of a writer, i really have issues with plot and logic as the conclusion may display

@Owen Heitmann
Yeah the conclusion is a bit disjointed, i cut 4 pages, which probably didn't help. glad you liked the art though!

[H PoP]

I really like the aesthetic you took for this. The way the text is integrated into the overall design is awesome. The storytelling design is pretty much down, but it works well for posting all in a column. Good stuff.