Luke Pickett -Angry Sarah Adventure!-Central Vic- *finished*

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Luke Pickett -Angry Sarah Adventure!-Central Vic- *finished*

Postby fox.django on Sun Jun 08, 2008 11:30 am

Start Time 11.30
Words: Skin, Quieter, Police

Pages Soon!
Last edited by fox.django on Mon Jun 09, 2008 11:28 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Luke Pickett - Untitled atm - Central Victoria

Postby Brendan Halyday on Sun Jun 08, 2008 12:42 pm

thanks luke! Best of luck to you too man!
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Re: Luke Pickett - Untitled atm - Central Victoria

Postby fox.django on Sun Jun 08, 2008 1:42 pm

First Three pages! its not the greatest thing i've ever drawn, but i trying a new style out. Been reading allot of glister by Andi Watson lately. more soon!

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Last edited by fox.django on Mon Jun 09, 2008 4:29 pm, edited 7 times in total.
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Re: Luke Pickett - Untitled atm - Central Victoria

Postby Brendan Halyday on Sun Jun 08, 2008 2:04 pm

nice start luke. keep it coming. Now if only i could get past this dreaded writers block...
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Re: Luke Pickett - Untitled atm - Central Victoria

Postby Pauk on Sun Jun 08, 2008 3:58 pm

Those are all my favourite muted colours! It's like you reached into my brain-meats and stole my personal colour scheme... well done sir. It's shaping up nicely.
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Re: Luke Pickett - Untitled atm - Central Victoria

Postby fox.django on Sun Jun 08, 2008 5:06 pm

thanks guys i figure I'll just edit in the new pages, that way there all in the same place. so pages 4 and 5 are new check'em out!
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Re: Luke Pickett - Untitled atm - Central Victoria

Postby fox.django on Sun Jun 08, 2008 7:06 pm

Page 6 is done! i think the next couple should be a little quicker, hopefully least.
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Re: Luke Pickett - Untitled atm - Central Victoria

Postby fox.django on Sun Jun 08, 2008 8:00 pm

page 7!
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Re: Luke Pickett - Rambling Adventure! - Central Victoria

Postby fox.django on Mon Jun 09, 2008 11:26 am

all pages up! had to cut a little of the story but i think it worked out alright, had time to go back and redo page 1 as well so that's was alright. it was a new style for me, and i think i grew into quite well.
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Re: Luke Pickett -Angry Sarah Adventure!-Central Vic- *finished*

Postby emma-jeans on Mon Jun 09, 2008 5:17 pm

I really like the style - and love the way the colour and shape of the word balloons and writing add to the story/characterisations.
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Re: Luke Pickett -Angry Sarah Adventure!-Central Vic- *finished*

Postby Egofreaky on Mon Jun 09, 2008 5:26 pm

That was something pretty special...
Going to develop this one at all? Or just leave it where it is?
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Re: Luke Pickett -Angry Sarah Adventure!-Central Vic- *finished*

Postby Owen Heitmann on Tue Jun 10, 2008 3:48 pm

I like the art - it's clear and easy to follow even without panel borders. But the conclusion to the story pretty much left me with a similar reaction to Bridee.
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Re: Luke Pickett -Angry Sarah Adventure!-Central Vic- *finished*

Postby fox.django on Tue Jun 10, 2008 4:09 pm

@emma-jeans
why thankyou, it just kinda seemed like a good idea, glad you like it

@Egofreaky
I think I might try and develop it, i don't really consider myself much of a writer, i really have issues with plot and logic as the conclusion may display :p

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Yeah the conclusion is a bit disjointed, i cut 4 pages, which probably didn't help. glad you liked the art though!
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Re: Luke Pickett -Angry Sarah Adventure!-Central Vic- *finished*

Postby H PoP on Wed Jun 11, 2008 2:05 am

I really like the aesthetic you took for this. The way the text is integrated into the overall design is awesome. The storytelling design is pretty much down, but it works well for posting all in a column. Good stuff.
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