Many thanks Matt!
Paul, to make you happy I'll drop this little bit of info: What I'm showing is just the preview to get the ball rolling (something to send to the publishers basically to go with the synopsis etc) so if all goes well and I don't have to make too many drastic changes, Kranburn should have a fair few pages in it.
People get warned about trying to tackle some 400 page epic etc as their first project, but I figure I've cut my teeth on shorts with Stark Reality and I'm ready to have a go at something with some real meat on its bones.
Btw, read The List Vol2 a few nights ago. It's a bit touchy feely innit?
Only punning, quite a delicious tale of knifey knifey.