Does this even scan?

[Craig Vial]

And I mean scan as in make sense when reading, not using a scanner.

Anyway, I was playing around with a slightly experimental (for me) strip last weekend and came up with this.



Does that work? I normally don't like arrows, but it didn't feel so bad in this case.

Cheers

[lanigoodness]

That looks fantastic! I always find silent comics soo eerie (in the best way).
It definitely makes sense, haha I didn't even notice that there were any arrows tbh until I read it for the second time, it just looked like a pattern, neat :3

[Craig Vial]

Cheers Lani. I had a quick look at your tumblr account. I like the one where you ask your girlfriend for a pen. Very cute.

I've been playing around with a colourful version of the above.



I'm a bit lost with colour, mostly a black and white kinda guy, but I thought this gave it a little more pop.