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Birds of Prey sample pg

Postby GemR on Fri Sep 10, 2010 7:19 pm

Hey there, thought I'd show my first pg of a 5 pg sample script I'm working on though this looks like a pin up I promise it's not :)

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Re: Birds of Prey sample pg

Postby Dean Rankine on Fri Sep 10, 2010 7:28 pm

Wow! This is really great, Gem! Even the floor is groovy :)
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Re: Birds of Prey sample pg

Postby Dean Rankine on Fri Sep 10, 2010 7:47 pm

And welcome to the forum BTW!
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Re: Birds of Prey sample pg

Postby maggie on Sat Sep 11, 2010 9:21 am

Dean Rankine wrote:Wow! This is really great, Gem! Even the floor is groovy :)

huhuhuh... "groovy"... I see what you did there...

Very nice GemR, looking forward to seeing more. :)
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Re: Birds of Prey sample pg

Postby GemR on Sat Sep 11, 2010 4:04 pm

Thanx,nice to be here,worked hard on this one, usually takes me ages to complete a pg ;)
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Re: Birds of Prey sample pg

Postby bluetoaster on Thu Sep 23, 2010 8:59 pm

Pencil looks very nice indeed.
Interested to see how it'll look inked.

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Re: Birds of Prey sample pg

Postby GemR on Fri Sep 24, 2010 9:14 pm

Thanx :|> but it's probably not going to happen as I can't ink to save myself :)
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Re: Birds of Prey sample pg

Postby Cassandra on Thu Oct 14, 2010 8:46 pm

Firstly kudos on doing a Birds of Prey page, I'm such a fan of that series. I love your rendering, you use shadows wonderfully. Next time I suggest trying to centre your figures a little more, or perhaps making them a bit bigger since they are getting a little lost in the background. The details on the floor and ceiling are great too btw!
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Re: Birds of Prey sample pg

Postby Matt Elder on Fri Oct 29, 2010 10:31 pm

Some really nice sweet pencils here. Just one thing to be a little careful of is the size of the characters. They feel just a little bit on the small side (unless this page is filled with dialogue). The characters themselves only take up about half the height of the page. The floor looks rather spotless (which maybe they are in some high tech lab but if not), put something on the ground in the foreground. Whether some boxes, loose bits of paper, dripping water / water puddles etc. or something relevant to the scene / story. It will help fill up the space and make it feel less empty. The room interior otherwise looks great and you can tell you've put some time and perspective into it.
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