by Matt Elder on Fri Oct 29, 2010 10:31 pm
Some really nice sweet pencils here. Just one thing to be a little careful of is the size of the characters. They feel just a little bit on the small side (unless this page is filled with dialogue). The characters themselves only take up about half the height of the page. The floor looks rather spotless (which maybe they are in some high tech lab but if not), put something on the ground in the foreground. Whether some boxes, loose bits of paper, dripping water / water puddles etc. or something relevant to the scene / story. It will help fill up the space and make it feel less empty. The room interior otherwise looks great and you can tell you've put some time and perspective into it.
Less talk, more do.
Matt Elder