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Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby robobop on Thu Aug 05, 2010 11:21 am

Hey everyone,

Here's the first 3 pages of a short story (9 page effort) comic called Jikininki, based on a Japanese ghost story. This is my first effort and I really want to improve so I would love some crits - don't hold back, I can take it! Anyway I nearly finished, so expect the rest of it very soon.

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p3


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Re: Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby robobop on Sun Aug 15, 2010 6:30 pm

OK here are pages 4-6. Only 3 more pages to go!

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Re: Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby Dean Rankine on Sun Aug 15, 2010 8:10 pm

These are great! I'm intrigued (And hanging to see how the story turns out).

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Re: Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby jpaulos on Sun Aug 15, 2010 8:25 pm

I agree, can't wait to see more!
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Re: Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby robobop on Tue Aug 31, 2010 2:13 pm

Thanks for the interest guys! It's actually finished except for some panels on the next page (7). Trying to figure out how to make people talking interesting... I find Dave McKean is a master of making me hang onto every panel.
Will post very soon!
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Re: Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby robobop on Wed Sep 01, 2010 3:16 pm

OK I was able to finish it!
Here are the last 3 pages....
(Crits most welcome!)

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Re: Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby Dean Rankine on Wed Sep 01, 2010 3:35 pm

Well done! Fascinating story. You should pimp it around to a local anthology.

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Re: Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby robobop on Mon Sep 27, 2010 8:40 am

Thanks Dean!
I'd love to put it into a local anthology. I'll look around. Do you know any?
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Re: Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby Dean Rankine on Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:33 pm

No. I've been a bit out of the loop these days. You might get some joy if you post a thread asking what's around. Or go to the Melbourne comic meet-up as another option.

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Re: Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby Frank Candiloro on Mon Sep 27, 2010 9:06 pm

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Re: Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby robobop on Wed Sep 29, 2010 3:16 pm

Hey Frank,
Thanks so much for the link. I just sent them an email so hopefully it all goes well.
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Re: Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby Paul Bedford on Mon Oct 04, 2010 7:41 pm

Really nice work, Robo. Congrats!

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Re: Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby BMB on Wed Oct 06, 2010 9:51 am

A lovely read! :|>


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Re: Jikininki - 9 page comic I've been working on

Postby robobop on Sat Oct 16, 2010 9:42 am

Thanks for all the comments everyone. I'm working on some new stuff so there will be more!
And I'll bring some to the meetup next time..
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