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Sunday 2am

Postby Laocorn on Sat Jan 16, 2010 5:39 pm

A friend of mine wrote this up drunkenly one Sunday morning while walking home at 2am, figured it was a nice and simple enough piece to adapt and get the sequential gears rolling again...

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Re: Sunday 2am

Postby Tom on Sat Jan 16, 2010 6:37 pm

Great stuff Hayden, always good to get back into it. A well told story too.
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Re: Sunday 2am

Postby jpaulos on Mon Jan 18, 2010 6:06 am

I agree. I also think your storytelling is really good here and you set the mood really well. The story needs another page or two, it kind of leaves you hanging a bit, but I guess that was intentional? Good work anyway, your style is really evolving.
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Re: Sunday 2am

Postby Laocorn on Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:29 pm

Thanks guys!

Jase, yeah it was intentional... Plus I ran out of lines to use. :P
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Re: Sunday 2am

Postby Paul Bedford on Wed Mar 03, 2010 5:52 pm

Enticing set up, mate. Nice one!
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Re: Sunday 2am

Postby Daren White on Wed Mar 03, 2010 8:10 pm

I liked this when I first read it but didn't get around to commenting. I think it's nicely self contained in three pages. The kind of thing I used to look for in the original run of DeeVee. You should try more of these.
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Re: Sunday 2am

Postby Laocorn on Thu Mar 11, 2010 3:35 pm

Paul, cheers mate.

Daren, cheers also... I'm been hoping to do a few more of these shorter style stories, tricky thing seems to be finding content or at least ideas that can be explored and rounded out nicely in that amount of pages.
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Re: Sunday 2am

Postby BMB on Wed Mar 24, 2010 10:10 am

Does your mate live in the Belgrave area?

Nice mood to it dude. :|>
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Re: Sunday 2am

Postby Laocorn on Thu Mar 25, 2010 5:27 pm

Haha, I'm guessing Belgrave's probably got the same rep as the area he does live in... :P

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