by Tom on Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:56 pm
There's some pretty wild stuff going there!
Cool looking characters and some nice dynamic frames.
The main problem for me is that the backgrounds are too busy and swamping the foregrounds. It's only the pencils so it might work out with the inks but for the moment there are too many hard blacks in the incidental detail (like what ever the bearded guy is hiding behind).
I'd suggest simplifying your backgrounds and using heavier lines in your foregrounds. This will add a lot more depth to the images and let the viewer follow the action more easily.
Cheers,
Tom