Rebecca 'biccy' Wong - The Amoebae Ghost - Melbourne

[Biccy]

Hello everyone, it's been awhile.

The time is now 3:31pm and my words are: amoebae, spits and lifeguards to be honest these words are going to make it hard.

I currently have a cold right now and I feel sick just from walking about, I'll do my best to get all 24 pages done, but I might have to stop at the 8 or 16 page mark.

Alright. Here we go!

[maggie]

Break a leg, as they say! Or whatever the comics equivalent is.

[Biccy]

pg1


pg2.

The Amoebae Ghost, I'm so sorry for how lame that sounds XD

[Biccy]

pg3


pg4


just came back from dinner and finished up page 4. Going to get back to work now

[Biccy]

two new pages done

pg5


pg6


this comic would be more scary if it wasn't for my art style XD

[Biccy]

pg7


final page before I go to sleep See you guys in the morning

[Biccy]

worst pages I have ever drawn XP

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pg9


I don't think I'm going to be able to finish my comic XP I need to do about 3 hours of traveling at 11:30 and I'm not even dressed yet.

If it's ok, I might try and finish up the comic after my 24 hours are up?

[maggie]

You're certainly welcome to come backhand finish! That's more important than anything.

[LauraSeabrook]

[Owen Heitmann]

I think the "Amoebae Ghost" needs to work on its name if it wants to inspire true terror.

However, the imagery of the forest being red and white from blood and bones is surprisingly effective and gruesome. I hope you finish the story!

[Ian T]

Rebecca, the set up of "Amoebae Ghost" is compelling and fun - this is worth finishing outside the timeframe, although there must be a way to rephrase that last panel to make it complete in a cliffhangery kind of way...

Cheers,

Ian T.