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Rebecca 'biccy' Wong - The Amoebae Ghost - Melbourne

Postby Biccy on Sun Jun 10, 2012 3:34 pm

Hello everyone, it's been awhile.

The time is now 3:31pm and my words are: amoebae, spits and lifeguards to be honest these words are going to make it hard.

I currently have a cold right now and I feel sick just from walking about, I'll do my best to get all 24 pages done, but I might have to stop at the 8 or 16 page mark.

Alright. Here we go!
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Re: Rebecca 'biccy' Wong - wip - Melbourne

Postby maggie on Sun Jun 10, 2012 3:38 pm

Break a leg, as they say! Or whatever the comics equivalent is. :)
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Re: Rebecca 'biccy' Wong - wip - Melbourne

Postby Biccy on Sun Jun 10, 2012 4:49 pm

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The Amoebae Ghost, I'm so sorry for how lame that sounds XD
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Re: Rebecca 'biccy' Wong - The Amoebae Ghost - Melbourne

Postby Biccy on Sun Jun 10, 2012 8:55 pm

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just came back from dinner and finished up page 4. Going to get back to work now :)
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Re: Rebecca 'biccy' Wong - The Amoebae Ghost - Melbourne

Postby Biccy on Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:20 pm

two new pages done :)

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this comic would be more scary if it wasn't for my art style XD
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Re: Rebecca 'biccy' Wong - The Amoebae Ghost - Melbourne

Postby Biccy on Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:58 pm

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final page before I go to sleep :) See you guys in the morning
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Re: Rebecca 'biccy' Wong - The Amoebae Ghost - Melbourne

Postby Biccy on Mon Jun 11, 2012 9:49 am

worst pages I have ever drawn XP

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I don't think I'm going to be able to finish my comic XP I need to do about 3 hours of traveling at 11:30 and I'm not even dressed yet.

If it's ok, I might try and finish up the comic after my 24 hours are up?
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Re: Rebecca 'biccy' Wong - The Amoebae Ghost - Melbourne

Postby maggie on Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:04 am

You're certainly welcome to come backhand finish! That's more important than anything. :)
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Re: Rebecca 'biccy' Wong - The Amoebae Ghost - Melbourne

Postby LauraSeabrook on Mon Jun 11, 2012 6:03 pm

Biccy wrote:If it's ok, I might try and finish up the comic after my 24 hours are up?
That's the spirit! The other year I did supplementary pages after the main story.
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Re: Rebecca 'biccy' Wong - The Amoebae Ghost - Melbourne

Postby Owen Heitmann on Mon Jun 11, 2012 7:24 pm

I think the "Amoebae Ghost" needs to work on its name if it wants to inspire true terror.

However, the imagery of the forest being red and white from blood and bones is surprisingly effective and gruesome. I hope you finish the story!
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Re: Rebecca 'biccy' Wong - The Amoebae Ghost - Melbourne

Postby Ian T on Wed Jun 13, 2012 4:20 pm

Rebecca, the set up of "Amoebae Ghost" is compelling and fun - this is worth finishing outside the timeframe, although there must be a way to rephrase that last panel to make it complete in a cliffhangery kind of way...

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