Chris Gooch - Choices (working title) - Melbourne, Australia

[newcolossus773]

I've been working at squishface with Aaron, Ben, Brendan and Russel. I've finished drawing, as of 8ish this morning, and will post pages after I scan them and stuff.

IMPORTANT: The pages are posted in reverse order (sorry), so if you want to read it, the comic starts at the bottom of the post.

[newcolossus773]

Shit, forgot to say, comic is 18-19 pages long (there are 18 drawn pages, but i re-use one, so...)

[newcolossus773]

Back from lunch! Okay, these file setting should work fine, and all 17 pages (sorry for above mistake) should upload.

[Owen Heitmann]

Hah, I have to admit, I read the pages in the wrong order first, because they are displaying in reverse order in your post. I worked out my mistake from the file names and then read it in the correct order, but I must say I almost (almost) preferred it in reverse - it was kind of like Memento!

The art looks a lot better at full size than it does in the thumbnails, also - really bold and stark, and I like your use of black. The layouts of the third and second to last pages in particular are great. Nice work!

[newcolossus773]

Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it.

[mamath]

I did the same reading backwards thing that Owen did. ;; Oops!

I really like the art style you've used - it works so well and is very distinctive. Great work!

[antains]

Oh, read it in order. That was brilliant! Not the way I started thinking the story would go. Awesome!

[Ian T]

Okay, I read the last four pages backwards before I figured out what was wrong. The right way around this works really well - a stark style with a circular narrative - nice!

Cheers,

Ian T.

[Ben H]

This is really good... consistent, clean quality through the whole thing! It was like you didn't actually get tired. Good to have you at Squishface!

[newcolossus773]

Thanks! I didn't actually get tired until I finished at 9, concentrating on the drawing kept me up. Thanks for having me at Squishface. It was lots of fun!

[Kenny]

Love how you use the same picture at the start and end for effect. The second time you look at it, knowing what you know, it's so different.