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Chris Gooch - Choices (working title) - Melbourne, Australia

Postby newcolossus773 on Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:22 am

I've been working at squishface with Aaron, Ben, Brendan and Russel. I've finished drawing, as of 8ish this morning, and will post pages after I scan them and stuff.

IMPORTANT: The pages are posted in reverse order (sorry), so if you want to read it, the comic starts at the bottom of the post.
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Re: Chris Gooch - Choices (working title) - Melbourne, Austr

Postby newcolossus773 on Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:23 am

Shit, forgot to say, comic is 18-19 pages long (there are 18 drawn pages, but i re-use one, so...)
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Re: Chris Gooch - Choices (working title) - Melbourne, Austr

Postby newcolossus773 on Sun Jun 10, 2012 1:16 pm

Back from lunch! Okay, these file setting should work fine, and all 17 pages (sorry for above mistake) should upload.
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14.jpg
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12.jpg
11.jpg
10.jpg
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7 FOR SAVING.jpg
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1.jpg
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Re: Chris Gooch - Choices (working title) - Melbourne, Austr

Postby Owen Heitmann on Mon Jun 11, 2012 1:06 pm

Hah, I have to admit, I read the pages in the wrong order first, because they are displaying in reverse order in your post. I worked out my mistake from the file names and then read it in the correct order, but I must say I almost (almost) preferred it in reverse - it was kind of like Memento!

The art looks a lot better at full size than it does in the thumbnails, also - really bold and stark, and I like your use of black. The layouts of the third and second to last pages in particular are great. Nice work!
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Re: Chris Gooch - Choices (working title) - Melbourne, Austr

Postby newcolossus773 on Tue Jun 12, 2012 11:23 am

Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it.
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Re: Chris Gooch - Choices (working title) - Melbourne, Austr

Postby mamath on Tue Jun 12, 2012 7:58 pm

I did the same reading backwards thing that Owen did. :D;; Oops!

I really like the art style you've used - it works so well and is very distinctive. Great work!
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Re: Chris Gooch - Choices (working title) - Melbourne, Austr

Postby antains on Wed Jun 13, 2012 1:41 pm

Oh, read it in order. That was brilliant! Not the way I started thinking the story would go. Awesome!
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Re: Chris Gooch - Choices (working title) - Melbourne, Austr

Postby Ian T on Wed Jun 13, 2012 3:49 pm

Okay, I read the last four pages backwards before I figured out what was wrong. The right way around this works really well - a stark style with a circular narrative - nice!

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Re: Chris Gooch - Choices (working title) - Melbourne, Austr

Postby Ben H on Thu Jun 14, 2012 6:04 pm

This is really good... consistent, clean quality through the whole thing! It was like you didn't actually get tired. Good to have you at Squishface!
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Re: Chris Gooch - Choices (working title) - Melbourne, Austr

Postby newcolossus773 on Mon Jun 18, 2012 8:59 pm

Thanks! I didn't actually get tired until I finished at 9, concentrating on the drawing kept me up. Thanks for having me at Squishface. It was lots of fun!
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Re: Chris Gooch - Choices (working title) - Melbourne, Austr

Postby Kenny on Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:52 pm

Love how you use the same picture at the start and end for effect. The second time you look at it, knowing what you know, it's so different.
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