Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (23 pg) FIN

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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (8-16pg? Manga)

Postby Alecat on Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:19 am

Oh! How ominous. We are very excitedly awaiting your next page!
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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (8-16pg? Manga)

Postby Chuc on Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:57 am

Coming right up :)

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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (8-16pg? Manga)

Postby Chuc on Mon Jun 13, 2011 3:00 am

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Calling it a night, this cold is getting the better of me..
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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (8-16pg? Manga)

Postby Terragent on Mon Jun 13, 2011 3:10 am

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I've really enjoyed this, I hope you get the chance to finish it up later. Get well soon - don't let that cold get the better of you!
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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (8-16pg? Manga)

Postby Chuc on Mon Jun 13, 2011 8:38 am

I'm back! Cold is a little better, but I think I can hold off till this is over..
I'll be pullin a sickie for just one of my classes today :P

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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (16pg)

Postby Chuc on Mon Jun 13, 2011 9:32 am

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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (16pg)

Postby Chuc on Mon Jun 13, 2011 11:38 am

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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (16pg)

Postby Alecat on Mon Jun 13, 2011 11:40 am

Loving it! Glad to hear the closet "speak" again, too. You must be doing a great job for me to find its seasons of silence unnerving.
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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (16pg)

Postby H PoP on Mon Jun 13, 2011 12:52 pm

Award for best line in the 24 hour challenge: "Guys, what does MILF mean?"

Nice and dark. I was hoping it would go that way too. I like the how the slight respite in hope changed in just a moment into resignation.
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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (16pg)

Postby Chuc on Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:28 pm

FIN!
Thanks guys for the support, now.. I have to go to class..

Henry - I seriously had my doubts about that line.. XD Glad you got a chuckle out of it!
Thanks for the feedback on the direction, I hope it doesn't turn out too sentimental.. :D
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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (23 pg) FIN

Postby LauraSeabrook on Mon Jun 13, 2011 2:23 pm

I just loved the ZEN quality of this one.
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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (23 pg) FIN

Postby jing on Mon Jun 13, 2011 8:37 pm

WAAAAAAAAAAAH!
For someone who overly anthropomorphises inanimate objects, this was just heartrending.
I was sad for an IKEA CUPBOARD and it is YOUR FAULT!

Dispassionately, this is a great concept, beautifully executed, well paced and well written. One of my faves this year.

I hope you're feeling better!
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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (23 pg) FIN

Postby Alecat on Mon Jun 13, 2011 11:34 pm

Loved it. A really unique story, well done.
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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (23 pg) FIN

Postby Chuc on Tue Jun 14, 2011 12:23 am

Thanks guys so much for reading! :D

I'm feeling slightly better today, at least I'm out of the runny nose stage and into the uncontrollable coughing (which requires much less tissues..).
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Re: Alastair Sew Hoy - Closet Story - Osaka (23 pg) FIN

Postby Ka-ru on Tue Jun 14, 2011 1:13 am

I really enjoyed this concept. Well done. I'm in the process of throwing out an old desk and no you've got me all worried that I'm hurting it's feelings... :)
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