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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, [potentially mature?]

Postby jing on Sun Jun 12, 2011 3:19 am

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Photoshop has seizes up. AWESOME!

Thanks, Maggie, it's hard to tell if something is 'mature' at 3am :)

And thanks for the encouragement you guys! Must keep drawing...

EDIT: Clearly I meant Potassium Permanganate. Shush, shush, I don't even know anything.
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, [potentially mature?]

Postby jing on Sun Jun 12, 2011 4:02 am

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clearly I meant SEIZED. Which appears to break that old 'I before E except after C' rule though I'm told it has loads of obscure exceptions that make the rhyme not so much rhyme as not rhyme.

Ah. THERE'S the madness. I feel much better.
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, [potentially mature?]

Postby maggie on Sun Jun 12, 2011 4:09 am

I just thought you were LOLcat'ing. You know...
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, [potentially mature?]

Postby jing on Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:22 am

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Maggie, if I were LOLcating I would make more sense. My other half just came in to say goodnight and I could not form understandable sentences. I just hugged him until he went away, which I think conveyed something good?
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, [potentially mature?]

Postby jing on Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:24 am

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Apparently not everyone thinks that <triangle brackets> means <foreign language>. That's what they were supposed to mean. Sorry for any confusion!
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, [potentially mature?]

Postby jing on Sun Jun 12, 2011 6:30 am

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Yes, cheap, I know, but I couldn't find a way to work in stick figures, which are my favourite way to gain back time.
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, [potentially mature?]

Postby LauraSeabrook on Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:06 am

Ooh-all - trouble (or someone with a blown up paper bag)!
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, [potentially mature?]

Postby jing on Sun Jun 12, 2011 11:03 am

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PRETENDING (that's two in comic, now, how AWFUL!)
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, [potentially mature?]

Postby jing on Sun Jun 12, 2011 11:05 am

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There should really be a, "And then, after the ultraviolence" type of label on that last panel. WHY MUST I ALWAYS BE RUNNING IT SO CLOSE TO THE WIRE?!?

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AND HERE! The first panel of the next page should have a label that says something like, "One week later," or ,"In a future not far from now," or "Something." But it doesn't. *shrug* I shall have to just put up with my terrifying lack of attention to detail.

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WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

that sucked

where did my backgrounds go

okokokok I have to eat some bacon and then I will come back to encourage others.
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, [potentially mature?]

Postby Tsumi on Sun Jun 12, 2011 11:46 am

Moist women! Money for plutonium! I like it! ^0^b

Well done for going the distance - enjoy your much deserved bacon. =3
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, [potentially mature?]

Postby LauraSeabrook on Sun Jun 12, 2011 11:54 am

Totally mad - wonderful! :D
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, [potentially mature?]

Postby Aen on Sun Jun 12, 2011 12:02 pm

Really cool stuff :) Hat's off to ya! (Yes multiple hat's)
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, "Ah! My Overlord!"

Postby maggie on Sun Jun 12, 2011 2:47 pm

That made me happy. :)
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, "Ah! My Overlord!"

Postby robin t-lord on Sun Jun 12, 2011 3:13 pm

Go Sarah! Well done!
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Re: Sarah Milne, Adelaide, "Ah! My Overlord!" [done]

Postby ShadowFD on Sun Jun 12, 2011 4:18 pm

Evildoers doing evil things to evil people.

I love it!
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