Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney (24 pg FINISHED)

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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney

Postby Craig Vial on Sun Jun 12, 2011 9:30 am

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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney

Postby Craig Vial on Sun Jun 12, 2011 9:31 am

LauraSeabrook wrote:Do you think he's gone to the wrong house, maybe?


That makes a lot more sense than what I've written.
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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney

Postby Craig Vial on Sun Jun 12, 2011 9:59 am

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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney

Postby Craig Vial on Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:00 am

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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney

Postby LauraSeabrook on Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:08 am

If they were smart they would have caught a taxi to the train station - but I bet that's our detective's seat!
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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney

Postby Craig Vial on Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:17 am

LauraSeabrook wrote:If they were smart they would have caught a taxi to the train station - but I bet that's our detective's seat!


Again, that makes a lot more sense than what I've written.
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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney

Postby maggie on Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:21 am

Given that I've been watching a lot of Poirot lately, this is especially funny to me. :|>
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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney

Postby Craig Vial on Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:31 am

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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney

Postby Craig Vial on Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:37 am

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Really blew some dialogue (not to mention Klose's head) on this one, but what the hey!

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And that's all she wrote! I'm very happy to be back in the 24 page club this year after going down to 16 last year. Crying babies and pooey nappies can't stop me!
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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney (24 pg FINISH

Postby LauraSeabrook on Sun Jun 12, 2011 11:51 am

Loved it. Poroit is a fave TV detective (after Holmes) so I enjoyed this immensely.
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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney (24 pg FINISH

Postby Elise McLellan on Sun Jun 12, 2011 11:55 am

That was fabulously good fun, really enjoyed it :D
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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney (24 pg FINISH

Postby Tsumi on Sun Jun 12, 2011 12:27 pm

Escaped mental patient playing detective? But he's still rather charming with his pointless accusations and poor observation skills! Well played this year, Mr. Vial. ^_^
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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney (24 pg FINISH

Postby LauraSeabrook on Sun Jun 12, 2011 12:51 pm

Tsumi wrote:But he's still rather charming with his pointless accusations and poor observation skills! Well played this year
Oh he had very good observation skills, just no idea what he was talking about! :P
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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney (24 pg FINISH

Postby Cyraxis on Sun Jun 12, 2011 1:28 pm

Well written sir! Enjoyed it.
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Re: Craig Vial - Killer in our midst - Sydney (24 pg FINISH

Postby Tsumi on Sun Jun 12, 2011 2:31 pm

LauraSeabrook wrote:
Tsumi wrote:But he's still rather charming with his pointless accusations and poor observation skills! Well played this year
Oh he had very good observation skills, just no idea what he was talking about! :P


In some instances true, but I thought him missing the polio thing was a bit of an oversight! ^3^'
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