Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - finito! (8 pages)

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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - Melbourne

Postby breachy on Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:20 pm

Page 7.
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Breezy? Check. Materialise? Oh yeah. Phosphorous? Bam!
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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - Melbourne

Postby antains on Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:39 pm

Ooh! It's pretty.

My only issue is that you have lived one of your terms for they day by breezing in and knocking up a comic with trips to the airport to boot.

Meanwhile, I've just drawn page 7 of my comic, which I started 44 hours ago, so ner ner ne ner ner...
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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - finito (8 pages)

Postby breachy on Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:13 pm

And 8!
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What a lovely way to spend a public holiday. Thanks for reading!

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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - finito! (8 pages)

Postby antains on Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:50 pm

If Death exchanged with the Tooth Fairy, what would he leave under the pillow?


Congratulations, by the way. A corker a usual.
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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - finito! (8 pages)

Postby Troy Kealley on Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:52 pm

Well done guys!
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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - finito! (8 pages)

Postby nickb on Mon Jun 08, 2009 8:10 pm

I'm in awe of your galaxy, Trev. It looks just like the real thing.

Other things I'm in awe of: the rest of it. The way you guys just waltzed through the 8 pages today, no worries. Well. I were impressed!
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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - finito! (8 pages)

Postby amanda on Mon Jun 08, 2009 10:39 pm

So cute! But I want mooore! What happened to the tooth fairy? How did santa go with the teeth? I wish this was an ongoing strip :-)
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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - finito! (8 pages)

Postby breachy on Mon Jun 08, 2009 11:37 pm

I had originally planned to tell the stories of the other critters, Amanda and Ant, like the tooth fairy, but 8 pages really isn't that long all said and done! I think the tooth fairy probably got drunk and took Santa's sleigh for lappies around dodgy neighborhoods while Santa woke terrified youngsters trying to get tooths from under their pillows (his touch ain't as light as a fairies after all).

Thanks for your kind words, Troy and Nick - I think galaxies are going to be a regular feature of my scripts from now on - Trev just does them so pretty, how can I not?!
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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - finito! (8 pages)

Postby Ive on Tue Jun 09, 2009 1:54 pm

Awesome! I love the Bunny in Death's cloak!
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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - finito! (8 pages)

Postby miers on Tue Jun 09, 2009 5:07 pm

I love it from page 1, and great choice of music too Big Bad Voodoo Daddy and Vampire Weekend is on my music rotation list :)
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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - finito! (8 pages)

Postby rumpusroomie on Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:17 am

Thanks guys, i had fun drawing it, i wish i could have done the full 24 hours this year unfortunately the last month at work has been a headache. but i couldn't not do anything at all. and now i get the fun of reading others.
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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - finito! (8 pages)

Postby breachy on Wed Jun 10, 2009 7:36 pm

Ive wrote:Awesome! I love the Bunny in Death's cloak!

Thanks, Ive - I love how his ears get all squashed and it makes him cranky!

Nice tunage choice, Meirs, very nice indeed!
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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - finito! (8 pages)

Postby kodama on Wed Jun 10, 2009 8:27 pm

That's such a cute concept, and the expressions are great :) I love the panel with Death offering the galaxy - I dream of the day when someone makes me an offer like that...
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Re: Jen and Trev - Exchange Day - finito! (8 pages)

Postby Owen Heitmann on Wed Jun 17, 2009 9:54 pm

Good golly gosh, that art work looks good enough to eat. (Y'know, if I enjoyed gnawing on skulls.) Trev's always raising the bar.

I'm not sure that the story quite lived up the potential of that opening page, but it was still fun, and hey, them's the breaks with a 24 hour comic. Given your weekend itinerary I'm impressed you were able to do anything!
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