Sarah Milne ~ Cryptopher Rabbit ~ ADELAIDE (FIN)

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Postby jing on Mon Jun 08, 2009 9:28 am

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WIND UP

Postby jing on Mon Jun 08, 2009 10:40 am

OKAY

I finished all the text editing and uploading by 9 AEST, though I see I made my final forum post 5 mins late (BOO).

HOWEVER I must confess:

I realised Jamtrousers and I were using different settings with the convert to jpg AFTER I'd uploaded about six pages in the middle, and it made the text hard to read (I wasn't paying attention, I can barely see atm anyway) so I re-uploaded higher quality versions between AEST 9:00 and 9:30 to fix this error. If anyone has a problem with that, well, I guess I can put the crappy versions back up.

But I am done. It's never been so close to the wire and now I have to go buy me a macdonald's breakfast before I pass out.

Oh, no, shout outs first...

Troy : I expect that is so you can fit them around corners and into packing containers.
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Amanda: Ta :) and BACON NEEDS TO BE IN MY BELLY ohmnohm why do you taunt meeee?
Jacen: I'm not a big fan of Twilight. I am, perhaps, the anti-fan. But Terry Pratchett is up there with Douglas Adams and no-one else in the world for comedic prose. So, yeah. For those two gentlemen I fangirl wildly.
grasshopper: It lends character, I think. And gives you an excuse to use INCREDIBLY DIFFICULT CHALLENGE ITEMS!!!


Mmmmm, I can already taste the hash brown in my miiind...
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Re: Sarah Milne ~ Cryptopher Rabbit ~ ADELAIDE (FIN)

Postby breachy on Mon Jun 08, 2009 10:47 am

Nice work, Jing! Your art always has such lovely energy to it. I'm glad Detective Rabbit found the murder mystery party - a detective with nothing to detect is a sad detective indeed!
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Re: Sarah Milne ~ Cryptopher Rabbit ~ ADELAIDE (FIN)

Postby Troy Kealley on Mon Jun 08, 2009 11:07 am

A most entertaining tale indeed!

Great comic again Sarah.
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Re: Sarah Milne ~ Cryptopher Rabbit ~ ADELAIDE (FIN)

Postby Pirotess on Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:32 pm

Woohoo you finished! Loved the witty dialogue and the Twilight and FFVII references (I am but a shallow fangirl).
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Re: Sarah Milne ~ Cryptopher Rabbit ~ ADELAIDE (FIN)

Postby EvilDan on Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:38 pm

I read it and it is excellent. Your paneling is getting so good.
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Re: Sarah Milne ~ Cryptopher Rabbit ~ ADELAIDE (FIN)

Postby Jessica McLeod on Mon Jun 08, 2009 1:23 pm

Ha, this was great!
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Re: Sarah Milne ~ Cryptopher Rabbit ~ ADELAIDE (FIN)

Postby mconnollyz on Mon Jun 08, 2009 2:35 pm

By golly thoroughly entertaining!
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Re: Sarah Milne ~ Cryptopher Rabbit ~ ADELAIDE (FIN)

Postby Washi on Mon Jun 08, 2009 3:28 pm

Awesome work. Your dialogue is awesome, as always, and your twilight and FF jokes cracked me up XD Hell, the whole thing pretty much cracked me up. And it all made sense in the end XD I am eternally impressed.
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Re: Sarah Milne ~ Cryptopher Rabbit ~ ADELAIDE (FIN)

Postby matt g on Mon Jun 08, 2009 5:56 pm

Possibly the most innocent potential use of "stiffening" imaginable *laugh*

Great work :)

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Re: Sarah Milne ~ Cryptopher Rabbit ~ ADELAIDE (FIN)

Postby antains on Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:20 pm

That was gold.
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Re: Sarah Milne ~ Cryptopher Rabbit ~ ADELAIDE (FIN)

Postby Owen Heitmann on Mon Jun 08, 2009 9:43 pm

Ahah, it makes more sense with the words on the page - but it's not quite the same without you acting out the dialogue. I mean, it's funny for sure... but we really need to figure out how to put some kind of commentary track on these things for everyone to get the full effect.
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Re: Sarah Milne ~ Cryptopher Rabbit ~ ADELAIDE (FIN)

Postby Ive on Tue Jun 09, 2009 1:54 pm

Funny stuff!
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