Rebecca 'Biccy' Wong - Not Us - Melbourne - DONE!

[Biccy]

Well this is my second comikaze, tho my first one was a few years ago. I finally have some free time from uni and what not. Whoo.

So it's 12:17 right now, so my words are: novice conjunction button.

EDIT: The full title is: The lives of those who are not us. But I'll call it Not Us for short.

[Troy Kealley]

Good luck and welcome back!

[Biccy]

Three pages done so far, I went with the norm of not really knowing what I was doing, though of one idea and just ran with it, I've got three pages done and right now I'm writing out a script and try and fit everything in the remaining 21 pages :3


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Title is long so for short I'm calling it Not Us

[Troy Kealley]

looking good!

[jing]

Oh, this is really lovely I can feel my girliness screaming for more. Panel 2 is my favourite so far. Great character design, esp the costumes!

[Biccy]

well I wrote out the story, but I'm not too happy with it, so I might change it a little to make it less depressing... I'm still not sure how to work "Conjunction" into the story. It's such an odd word... "Conjunction"...."Conjunction"...


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I'm sorry, I can't draw hands and death looks really lame. ^^;

[Biccy]

Ah my hand is starting to hurt. So I'll take a bit of a rest :3 I started at 12 so I still have a lot of time. I wrote out the story again and I'm pretty happy with where it goes :3 Everything is looking good right now. I'm going to try and do at lest 2 more pages before I sleep tonight, and if I'm lucky I'll get 4 or more done.


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[Pirotess]

Wow, this looks great and the story's really neat too! Looking forward to seeing the rest once it's done.

[Biccy]

Yeah, I drew another four more pages. So I will be calling it a night and drawing the rest of the pages when I wake up. I'm happy everyone is enjoying the comic, I hope it doesn't do something stupid and ruin it for you all.


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[Biccy]

I actually managed to draw two more pages last night before I went to sleep, but I hadn't added text till this morning. It's about 8:30 right now and I need to get the rest of the pages done before 12. I've got my coffee so here we go.


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[Biccy]

Four more pages, four pages left less then 2 hours, Oh I hope I get everything done in time. next few pages might need to be rushed. Knew I should have woke up sooner, but my bed was so nice and warm.


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[Biccy]

OMG! Finished! Phew. I was worried for a little bit I wasn't going to make it.

I hope everyone likes the story and where it went. I'm not a really good writer, I tired to make as little plot holes as I can but there may be a few since I did change my mind where the comic was heading now and then. ^^; The ending is a little squished together since I ran out of pages~ Sorry! I hope the story line isn't too hard to follow.

Anyways.. this was fun. I hope I can make it again next year.


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-end-

Yes, I'm sorry I cheated a little with 'Conjunction' I didn't know what to do with it! ^^;

[Pirotess]

Nice twist at the end! It's very hard to write a complete story under pressure like that, so I wouldn't feel too bad about the plot holes You tend to get better at it as you attempt the challenge repeatedly.

Congrats on making 24 pages!

[miers]

Gorgeous art, and as piro said I like the twist at the end.

[jacen_c]

A real nice story with an unexpected ending.