Michael Li - SKIN - 9 Pages - Sydney - FINISHED

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Re: Michael Li - SKIN - 9 Pages - Sydney - FINISHED

Postby practicecactus on Mon Jun 09, 2008 7:08 pm

Damn you sir. Damn you and your amazing art, and damn your ability to tell a great methodical and subtle, relaxed pace, short story.
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Re: Michael Li - SKIN - 9 Pages - Sydney - FINISHED

Postby FlyAwayPeter on Mon Jun 09, 2008 8:50 pm

Coooool! With lines and shading and everything. You achieve so much in short time!
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Re: Michael Li - SKIN - 9 Pages - Sydney - FINISHED

Postby Pauk on Mon Jun 09, 2008 8:51 pm

Wow, incredible art!
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Re: Michael Li - SKIN - 9 Pages - Sydney - FINISHED

Postby H PoP on Tue Jun 10, 2008 1:20 am

Avi has a point. Compile your stuff into volumes.
Damn. Every year you do these great shorts, I get jealous, and I have to join the queue. You do slice of life so well, and even your rushed pages look like a great deal of attention went into them. Your pencils are so clean.
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Re: Michael Li - SKIN - 9 Pages - Sydney - FINISHED

Postby exifer on Tue Jun 10, 2008 12:59 pm

This is great *__* i like the story (and it does make sense) and it's so easy to read and follow
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Re: Michael Li - SKIN - 9 Pages - Sydney - FINISHED

Postby Owen Heitmann on Wed Jun 11, 2008 12:10 pm

Wow, that's a great story! I think the explanatory note you posted above page 7 was unnecessary though - I would have liked to come to that realisation by reading the dialogue, I think it would have been clear enough as it was. And yeah, the story does make complete sense, in a creepy way. I like the way you use the protagonist's point of view to ask the reader to sympathise with an opinion they should find unacceptable - pretty clever technique. And it almost (but not quite) goes without saying: the art is fantastic.
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Re: Michael Li - SKIN - 9 Pages - Sydney - FINISHED

Postby SpectralAesthete on Wed Jun 11, 2008 10:12 pm

Oh wow, I like this. Can totally see it as some sort of standalone minidrama. There's something very tender about it too - love.
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