Loren Morris- Anaphylactic Cabaret- Adelaide **FINISHED**

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Re: Loren Morris- Anaphylactic Cabaret- Adelaide **FINISHED**

Postby onegreyelephant on Sun Jun 08, 2008 12:24 pm

Ive: Thanks--- they were very unplanned >_<;;

Red: I know!!! I wanted one alllll last night!

jacen_c: Very sketchy markers running out artwork......why are there no 24 hour art stores? 'Tis a crime I say!

neilmac: well you know what they say....you are what you draw. and I like weird :D
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Re: Loren Morris- Anaphylactic Cabaret- Adelaide **FINISHED**

Postby Laocorn on Sun Jun 08, 2008 4:25 pm

Always knew not to trust lightening strikes! Brilliance Loren!
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Re: Loren Morris- Anaphylactic Cabaret- Adelaide **FINISHED**

Postby onegreyelephant on Mon Jun 09, 2008 8:15 am

You just never can tell with lightning. especially when it always keeps hitting the same place....
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Re: Loren Morris- Anaphylactic Cabaret- Adelaide **FINISHED**

Postby Troy Kealley on Mon Jun 09, 2008 10:10 am

ha ha great stuff :D
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Re: Loren Morris- Anaphylactic Cabaret- Adelaide **FINISHED**

Postby practicecactus on Mon Jun 09, 2008 5:28 pm

Crazy man, crazy.
I too, like your funky chick-lady design. Your randomness pwns all. Congrats on going the whole hog and reaching 24! I tip my proverbial hat to you, miss.
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Re: Loren Morris- Anaphylactic Cabaret- Adelaide **FINISHED**

Postby onegreyelephant on Mon Jun 09, 2008 7:09 pm

Why thankyou-- you should know by now that random is the name of my game.....
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Re: Loren Morris- Anaphylactic Cabaret- Adelaide **FINISHED**

Postby tonia on Mon Jun 09, 2008 9:46 pm

I think "Squid" is the best sound effect ever
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Re: Loren Morris- Anaphylactic Cabaret- Adelaide **FINISHED**

Postby Egofreaky on Tue Jun 10, 2008 12:15 am

I'm agreeing with Tonia on the SFX here...

But you got it wrong... Demons much prefer cherry ripe bars as they were invented by the same man that founded MacRobertson Girls High.... true story...
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Re: Loren Morris- Anaphylactic Cabaret- Adelaide **FINISHED**

Postby onegreyelephant on Tue Jun 10, 2008 7:35 am

Oh-- I didn't know that. I'll be sure to use that information next time though!
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Re: Loren Morris- Anaphylactic Cabaret- Adelaide **FINISHED**

Postby Owen Heitmann on Tue Jun 10, 2008 1:40 pm

No wonder they couldn't get back to Hell - everyone knows you go to Hell in a handbasket, not a shopping trolley.

I'm not sure about the ending, but I enjoyed the rest of it. The repetitions worked really well in terms of plot and tapping into archetypal story-telling traditions (three is traditionally an important number in relation to the number of times you should accept a Snickers bar from a devil).

Loved the demon's goat legs, and the girl looked cool too. I wish the angel had got more page time - angels are usually boring compared to devils, but not angels that bring their own shot glasses!
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