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John Willanski - The Tontine - Adelaide - Finished!

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Postby ninjacat on Sun Jun 10, 2007 4:27 am

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I'm on the home stretch.
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Postby ninjacat on Sun Jun 10, 2007 7:12 am

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The penultimate page!
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And I'm done! WOO!
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Postby Washi on Sun Jun 10, 2007 5:08 pm

Mmmmm. dust plum :D

Nice work! Glad to see you did it - although I have to confess the skeleton beret made me laugh hardest ^^;
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Postby jacen_c on Mon Jun 11, 2007 11:07 am

An excellent little story. Good characters and I agree the skeleton at the end is way cool.
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Postby Li'l Sketchy on Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:04 pm

What a cool story. And here I thought a tontine was a pillow...

Very cool Raiders of the Lost Ark vibe. I would have put somewhere at the end 'Ok, I'll open it, but...' and the beret guy tells him to shutup, even though he was gonna warn him about the consequences, but you wrapped it up nicely!

I know very little about computer art... How did you put that all together?
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Postby Gary Lau on Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:03 pm

Hey John!

I loved your story and your art style! Big fan of these lost treasure, ancient temple explorer kinda stories, so you had me at page 2. Really nice art, too. I guess the time limitation and all had to end your story like how it is, but would like to hear and see what you would have done and taken these characters if you had no time limit. Great stuff!
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Postby Pirotess on Tue Jun 12, 2007 1:58 am

Great stuff, this looks so polished it's hard to tell you did it so quickly! Extra points for naming a character Tia Cuffee, too :p
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Postby apple head on Tue Jun 12, 2007 2:13 am

This is probably my fave one of the bunch so far, but I need a proper sit down for this. I'm all over the place right now!

It has a nice South Par Asthetic. I mean it in the nicest way :) It's simple nice and polished.
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Postby Demongoldfish on Tue Jun 12, 2007 3:22 am

loved the style. probably the "cleanest" result i have seen. looks like you spent a week on it. well done!
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Postby emma-jeans on Tue Jun 12, 2007 9:33 pm

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Postby Haruka-chan on Tue Jun 12, 2007 10:34 pm

Loved the characters, art, story, genre...everything! Top work ^_^ I want that DANCE! beanie, it's totally fab :D
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