Sarah Milne -- The Princess and the Gypsy -- Adelaide FINITO

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Postby jing on Sun Jun 11, 2006 11:33 am

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I am the King of Slack! Or Queen. Maybe I'm a queen...
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Postby jing on Sun Jun 11, 2006 11:33 am

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Postby mark selan on Sun Jun 11, 2006 11:36 am

That was great Sarah, really great

Tho i was expecting the gyspy to be a girl in drag
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Postby Owen Heitmann on Sun Jun 11, 2006 1:50 pm

This comic pleases me muchly. The ending is great, and I love the real gypsies. Also, I am jealous of the wonderful layout of page 5.
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Postby Clare on Sun Jun 11, 2006 2:14 pm

YAY!!! The ending is totally fabbo. I love it! Feeling super intimidated now but Leon and I will do our best to keep up to standard.
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Postby jamtrousers on Sun Jun 11, 2006 2:41 pm

damn you for finishing before me.

but it does look good.

i got deleted scene for show beat that. (though you're probably in bed now, i'm going to ring you and wake you up.)
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Postby hannijules on Sun Jun 11, 2006 5:45 pm

That was awesome... ended up much cleverer than I first anticipated.

I too usually work with a script and had little more than a rough outline on my humble effort today. Well done. Wish I'd writ a sript but then, I just woulda changed it as I went anyways.

Nice one, Sarah.
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Postby Pirotess on Sun Jun 11, 2006 10:35 pm

Ahh this was brilliant... hooray for crossdressing and dancing the tarantella! All the bug-eyed expressions made me giggle nonstop.
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Postby Washi on Mon Jun 12, 2006 1:40 am

Finished! How awesome ^_^ Terribly funny - I love the dentist! :D
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Postby jacen_c on Mon Jun 12, 2006 10:45 am

Very funny indeed
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Postby EvilDan on Mon Jun 12, 2006 10:59 am

Hey Baby, it is Amazing. Your story is sooooo good! And your character are cute as fuck. I'm so proud of you. your art has gotten so much better, you are so fucking talented.
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Postby rumpusroomie on Mon Jun 12, 2006 11:10 am

I'm getting diabetic! Soo cute! well done!

Jeremy the cross dressing prince gypsy wannabe is my favourite character so far!
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Postby breachy on Mon Jun 12, 2006 11:17 am

You can really tell you had a great script planned in advance. The final pages are a great reveal and punchline. And your art, as everyone has so rightly pointed out, is lovely.
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Postby onegreyelephant on Tue Jun 13, 2006 9:31 am

dammit, next year I SWEAR I will plan a script, or a storyline, or t least a vague idea of what Im writing......

SQUID!! SQUID!!! I love it.
enter the labratory.....
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Postby Li'l Sketchy on Tue Jun 13, 2006 9:58 am

I loved it. Funny, funny stuff. :D The dentist reveal was sweet.
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