That was awesome... ended up much cleverer than I first anticipated.
I too usually work with a script and had little more than a rough outline on my humble effort today. Well done. Wish I'd writ a sript but then, I just woulda changed it as I went anyways.
Finished! How awesome ^_^ Terribly funny - I love the dentist!
"The most likely way for the world to be destroyed, most experts agree, is by accident. That's where we come in; we're computer professionals. We cause accidents."
~ Nathaniel Borenstein
Hey Baby, it is Amazing. Your story is sooooo good! And your character are cute as fuck. I'm so proud of you. your art has gotten so much better, you are so fucking talented.
You can really tell you had a great script planned in advance. The final pages are a great reveal and punchline. And your art, as everyone has so rightly pointed out, is lovely.