Gary Cottons Tale ??? Progressive Comic

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Postby jacen_c on Tue Dec 05, 2006 10:11 pm

Here's a little poster I've been working on for the first Gary the Graveyard Hare book (don't worry Makepeace, my originals and the poster are on their way to you via Australia Post):

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Postby rumpusroomie on Tue Dec 05, 2006 11:34 pm

Just tiny criticism Jace, and it's not with the art, more with the backgrounds.

Could you strip the textures out of everything other than the path, the texture generator in the modeling software isn't too great. You'd be better off using your owen textures?

oh and maybe make the background of the background a black or darker colour cause currently it feels unfinished.
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Postby jacen_c on Wed Dec 06, 2006 8:55 pm

second attempt- keeping the background a little more basic, but with an actual skyline

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Postby rumpusroomie on Mon Dec 18, 2006 6:48 pm

Much better man!
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Postby makepeace on Mon Dec 18, 2006 7:10 pm

Daniel Sunstrom of http://www.controlfink.com fame has been confirmed as the cover artist. He won't be able to work on the cover until the new year though.

If you like the work on Daniels site be sure to tell him.
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