2005 Winners Anthology Cover

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Postby jacen_c on Fri Feb 17, 2006 7:47 pm

Here's option 1:

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Postby jacen_c on Fri Feb 17, 2006 7:48 pm

Or option two...with Li'l Sketchy's title

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Postby practicecactus on Fri Feb 17, 2006 8:51 pm

God, my Penguin looks shit up there next to all you other guys' stuff.

One little suggetion on my part for the upper left corner;
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Postby Li'l Sketchy on Fri Feb 17, 2006 9:13 pm

Yeah. Challengers of the Month is better. And the Pulpfaction logo in the corner... brilliant! Do we need a number though? Would it be better as 2005 Winners. 2006 Winners, etc etc... That way you don't have to try and fit THAT little nugget of information anywhere else on the cover, it's all taken care of.

Man, I need to make this cover pic look GOOD.

Back to it...
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Postby Egofreaky on Fri Feb 17, 2006 9:39 pm

Might I also suggest that the price is changed from $0.10... kinda selling them short don't you think?
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Postby practicecactus on Fri Feb 17, 2006 10:05 pm

Egofreaky wrote:Might I also suggest that the price is changed from $0.10... kinda selling them short don't you think?

Yes , well, Mr Smarty pants, that would be the number.
I was gonna change that, but I couldn't be arsed, just copied and pasted it from the same page, no mess, no fuss.
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Postby jacen_c on Sat Feb 18, 2006 12:17 am

I'll put the Pulp Faction Logo in the cover- and yes, I think it should be the year as opposed to an issue number.
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Postby jacen_c on Sat Feb 18, 2006 12:29 am

The next stage of the cover with Pulp Faction Logo and the year

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Postby Michael The Janitor on Sat Feb 18, 2006 1:05 pm

fully sick mate
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Postby neilmac on Sat Feb 18, 2006 1:29 pm

Either of those titles sound good... And both of the covers look fantastic! Awesome!
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Postby ChrisWahl on Sat Feb 18, 2006 4:05 pm

Hi Caanan

Here's some suggested alterations to the layout/design of the cover. It seemed there was too much blank sky on the left so I shifted a few things around, and before you know it I got completely carried away. Hope you don't mind.

Here's a list of things I altered:

- Moved and resized speech buble.
- Moved people to left.
- changed guy's eye direction
- changed guy's hand.
- added 'surprise sweat' (is that what you call it?)
- Shortened diving board
- relocated sausages (then moved them back again on Maggie's request)
- changed the sky to a slightly bluer colour
- opened mouth on shark and added bubbles
- enlarged shark
- added water effects
- added diving board ladder

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EDIT- Ok Mags, the tentacle, man-sausages are out, and Caanan's are back in.
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Postby XiaoLi on Sat Feb 18, 2006 4:37 pm

Awesome job on the cover Sketchy! :D
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Postby maggie on Sat Feb 18, 2006 4:42 pm

I'll hook you guys up with a hi-rez copy of the PF 'price' logo when the time comes. Just rattle my cage to remind me.

Chris... I dunno... that sausage becomes awful... suggestive... like that. Either a freakish segmented penis of a tentacle monster in his pants. What if they were hanging out his left pocket instead?

Sticking my nose in where it probably don't belong...
Maggie

PS - And nice work, Caanan. :)
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Postby practicecactus on Sat Feb 18, 2006 4:45 pm

maggie wrote:I'll hook you guys up with a hi-rez copy of the PF 'price' logo when the time comes. Just rattle my cage to remind me.

Oh that reminds me, Maggie, can we use the PF logo for the top left corner? ;)
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Postby ChrisWahl on Sat Feb 18, 2006 5:14 pm

maggie wrote:Chris... I dunno... that sausage becomes awful... suggestive... like that. Either a freakish segmented penis of a tentacle monster in his pants. What if they were hanging out his left pocket instead?


Okay, made the change Maggie. Tried hanging it out his left pocket, but then the orange jumpsuit guy looked suss. So it's back to Caanan's original.

I just wanted to silhouette some sausages against the sky....Freud would have a field day. :D
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