2005 Winners Anthology Cover

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Postby Li'l Sketchy on Sun Feb 19, 2006 3:26 pm

Heya gang!

Here's a newie...

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Oh, and the orange jumpsuit guy? Of course he looks suss! He's wearing an orange jumpsuit!! ;)
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Postby ChrisWahl on Sun Feb 19, 2006 4:28 pm

Maybe the orange guy should be poking him with a pointy stick.
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Postby Li'l Sketchy on Sun Feb 19, 2006 5:30 pm

Thanks Chris. I didn't add the sharp stick, but I did change the Orange Jumpsuit Man, so that he is now better demonstrating what the kid's supposed to be doing.

Plus it made the overall design better I think.
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Postby azahru on Sun Feb 19, 2006 6:06 pm

That's got to be the most phalic sausage yet! Proud and thrusty sausage.

I'd hate to deny the humour of sausage down the pants, but it could be worthwhile wrapping them round his neck...

or is that just crazy talk
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Postby Li'l Sketchy on Sun Feb 19, 2006 7:41 pm

I think they sell Proud and Thrusty Brand sausages at Safeway. 'Mmm mm. They're mighty meaty!!' ;)

You're prob'ly right, Liz. I'll see what I can do about repositioning them so they're in his hand instead. Because of how Orange Jumpsuit Man is positioned, you'd prob'ly all still get the reference right?

How's the second one looking, by the by? Better? Worse? Or should I go to my next idea which is a man in his underwear with a bucket of honey about to enter the bear enclosure at the zoo...?
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Postby azahru on Sun Feb 19, 2006 7:45 pm

I think I prefer the first one and I think it makes a great cover, but I'm all for the pleasure of seeing more of your artwork... and hey maybe a guy coated in honey would work for the beefcake/cheesecake thread too.
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Postby Li'l Sketchy on Sun Feb 19, 2006 9:27 pm

Some of you cannier folk may notice the pic has now been cleaned up. The sausages are now in his hand. It still works.

My own smut-o-meter is set quite high, so it's good to have people who can pull me up on these things. :D
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Postby Michael The Janitor on Mon Feb 20, 2006 3:35 pm

I still prefer the first one with him being pushed in by the jumpsuit guy
not that the last one was bad
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Postby Cybermotron on Tue Feb 21, 2006 4:12 pm

Its still not clear whats going on. The first one is definately clearer, with jumpsuit guy pushing him, although it still has the same main problem as the second. The angle of the picture hides where they are in relation to the shark tank, it looks like he's gonna jump off the edge of it, but away from it, not into it. If we looked at the scene from above everything would be a lot clearer. Maybe, putting him in bathers and turning him into a seaworld performer, might help show whats intended as well...Thats what I think anyway.
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Postby Daniel McKeown on Tue Feb 21, 2006 4:33 pm

Wnat if the guy in the orange overalls is demonstrating with the sausages and the other guy doesn't have any sausages?
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Postby Li'l Sketchy on Tue Feb 21, 2006 4:35 pm

All the feedback has been great guys. As soon as I get my real work out of the way, I shall post a reprisal. That feb challenge took a whole day out of me and now I'm WAY behind.

Oops. :p
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