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Glenn Smith - That Smell- Sydney

PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 12:29 am
by RossRadiation
Posting this for Glenn Smith, it's an eight pager



subtle use of kippers!

PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 2:47 am
wow, there's some great detail in this!

PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 9:37 pm
by Pirotess
I always wondered how your stuff would look when done in a hurry. Especially love the last panel - you can't really tell how much beer you've had :p

PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 9:49 pm
by Patrick Alexander
I see you suffer from 24-hour comic syndrome. "Building a story, building a story... pretty tired... building a story... Ah, fuck it -- here's how the rest of it was gonna go." ^_^

Nice work! Odd but easy to read.

PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2005 6:52 pm
by mark selan
its kind of like in primary school during creative writing classes, when you'd only have another 2 minutes to go, so you'd write "and then the world blew up"

i liked the build for this, hopefully it gets expanded and finsihed somewhere

PostPosted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 12:17 am
by tonia
"Stay away from the sushi district" - heh! I'd like to see where it was going too.

PostPosted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 12:24 am
by Gary Lau
Glenn, cool stuff. The ending was totally abrupt but at least you ended it. Enjoyed!

PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 3:11 am
by LaMiel
Nice work Glenn... I especially enjoyed the dream sequence and your making a guest appearance. Please tell me that Ben the character was NOT modeled after the Ben whose company you enjoyed during the challenge. If are totally right on about his love of sushi... but completely missed the sensualness and smooth Casanova-ness that he exudes.

PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 11:47 pm
by jing
Hah, this was very much enjoyable, yes. Especially the guy with the cleaver. Cleavers make my happy, they do. yup.

PostPosted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 9:44 pm
by Owen Heitmann
"Unresolved childhood conundrum" indeed.

Although I appreciate the fact that you at least gave it an ending of sorts, I was really getting wrapped up in what was happening, and very sad to see it conclude so abruptly.