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Declan O'Leary, Ash, Melbourne ; FINISHED

Postby Rich_n_Creamy on Sun Jun 12, 2005 7:52 pm

I'm starting now, 7.52pm.
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Postby Rich_n_Creamy on Mon Jun 13, 2005 6:44 pm

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Postby H PoP on Mon Jun 13, 2005 7:01 pm

For a simple story, the storytelling is very well conveived. I liked how you tell a story in loose sequence, and add that little twist right at the end.
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Postby Patrick Alexander on Mon Jun 13, 2005 7:14 pm

I had to re-read it a couple of times, but, neato! Your art has the correct blend of real-looking-ness and cartoony-ness to be just exactly slightly disconcerting.

Personally, I would take a good toaster over a diamond ring any day.
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Postby mark selan on Tue Jun 14, 2005 3:04 pm

i think its cool how the pages are sort of mixed up out of linear order but trying to figure where page 2 fits in the time line.

But cool presentation and nice style
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Postby Pirotess on Tue Jun 14, 2005 8:01 pm

Wow. Your style is really quirky and the story's just weird enough to have made me reread this a few times. You draw pretty fucking incredible shoes, too.
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Postby Gary Lau on Wed Jun 15, 2005 12:34 am

Wow, that's really surreal to read for the first time. Your art style is really cool, kinda twised and cartoony. I also like the non-linear story-telling and the reveal at the end there.

Two thumbs up!!
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Postby tonia on Thu Jun 16, 2005 10:04 am

Neat little story - did you draw it in blue or did you change it in Photoshop?
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Postby just some chick on Thu Jun 16, 2005 10:31 am

....oooh, i get it now. i had to read it a few times too. wow, really cool way of sequencing it, and the lack of text really makes you look at the artwork and understand what's hapenning. awesome work :O
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Postby sid on Thu Jun 16, 2005 10:03 pm

Maybe she felt putting metal into a toaster she could have plugged into mains a safety hazard and got cranky.
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Postby thistler on Sat Jun 18, 2005 6:36 pm

tonia wrote:Neat little story - did you draw it in blue or did you change it in Photoshop?

It was all done in blue. I didn't have any black fine-liners left for Dec to use. It was an awesome job seeing as he only came over to keep me company while I did the challenge.
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Postby Stephen Bai on Tue Jun 21, 2005 1:12 pm

Now how will she make toast?
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Postby Caleb on Tue Jun 21, 2005 6:44 pm

OMG! i just got it! after about 2 days of trying. Wow. That's kind of tragic. In a really subtle way. Me likee verry much. VERY MUCH.
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Postby Owen Heitmann on Wed Jun 22, 2005 9:23 pm

I think the blue inks work really well, which I was surprised at.

At first my reaction was: nice art, but I don't get it. THEN I GOT IT! Yes. Non linear. Smart. (Although, like Mark, I don't quite see where page 2 fits in.)
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