Gavin Thomson- Burnard the lonely Bunyip- ACT- finished!!

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Postby gavin on Tue Jun 14, 2005 9:34 am

Thanks for the feedback people.
Im glad it is considered cute- I was going for cute.
I did read Owly (the free comic book day version) & thought I really wanted to do an aussie like animal silly adventure thingy.. so I did.
My drawings detail fell apart after the few 1st pages- still trying to get that 'good and fast' thing down. Im going to have to redraw this thing up into a good version latter.

I was also very happy at the random word as it gave me the idea for the cow as Burnards freind the cow- yay!.
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Postby Ben H on Tue Jun 14, 2005 9:56 am

It was rushed of course, but your lines were accurate and clear, and it was totally cute.
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i concur

Postby STiKMAN on Tue Jun 14, 2005 11:11 am

Hey Gavin, I haven't seen your art for awhile, but it looks like it's improved a lot; I dig it! Adorable.
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Postby mark selan on Tue Jun 14, 2005 6:43 pm

the cutest entry so far by far
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Postby XiaoLi on Tue Jun 14, 2005 6:54 pm



That was great.
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Postby makepeace on Wed Jun 15, 2005 5:59 pm

Definately one of the best I've looked at so far Gavin. :)
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Postby Jasezilla on Wed Jun 15, 2005 6:17 pm

Adorable, great character acting...although at times he reminded me of Cartman.
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Postby gavin on Wed Jun 15, 2005 6:55 pm

thankyou nice people. you r nice. :)

He also did remind me of cartman when i was drawing him- I think its the face shape. I will have to have a fiddle with him.
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Postby Gary Lau on Thu Jun 16, 2005 9:49 pm

Yeah, I have to agree, very cute and adorable characters and story, Gavin! And you're right, reading it I was thinking what character he reminds me of and Cartman seems to be the closest. I don't think that's a bad thing though. I really liked it personally! Great stuff.
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Lovely work

Postby Jo B 1 on Fri Jun 17, 2005 8:11 pm

This is a great feel-good comic and can be enjoyed by readers in any language. Would love to see the "fixed up" version some time if you get around to it :)
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Postby xaverlex on Fri Jun 24, 2005 12:40 am

I love the facial expressions. You could easily sell a stuffed toy of that bunyip :D
sorry I'm late, this elephant totally copped a 'tude with me.
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