Kenny - Strawberries Armour, Melbourne

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Postby Kenny on Sun Jun 19, 2005 7:17 pm

Thanks for the comments again guys. I'm thinking I'm going to go back and clean this up. adding the original ending as well, so I'll have 2 versions to compare.

Wen: Fist of The North Star proves crying can be manly! :p

Gary: I do Naginata in real life. It's like Kendo with bigger sticks. :D
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Postby SB on Fri Jul 01, 2005 11:12 am

I know I that I am way behind with this feed back but none the less, nice work.

Your style's not as smooth and clean as some others but you still do a great job and I enjoyed your story. Cheesy, yes, but then no more so then most CLAMP manga, but then without any wings or mention of the Tokyo Tower. :p

Good subtle use of promoting too :p
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Postby Kenny on Wed Jul 06, 2005 9:35 pm

Thanks SB. I'll have to put wings and Tokyo tower in my next one now. Heehee.
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