Practice Cactus, "Nuffink", Gold Coast.*lezbo act*

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Practice Cactus, "Nuffink", Gold Coast.*lezbo act*

Postby practicecactus on Sat Jun 11, 2005 12:17 pm

Okay, got this bad boy all nutted out.
Inking first page.
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Postby practicecactus on Sat Jun 11, 2005 1:08 pm

Hi there and welcom to the special edition commantary for my 24 hour coimic challenge..

I came up with basic idea in the hour to prepare, wrote down what ideas I had,like a super hero, manga, ninja story..and I promissed a good friend I'd include lesbian action whatever I did, so I had that too.I wrote down all those points and in my big sketch book divided the page into eight and bassically roughed each page's panels.dedicating each page with a point I needed to hit.
this first page was to introduce the idea of Fuzz(the wabbit) and his dificulty in coming up with an idea.
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Postby practicecactus on Sat Jun 11, 2005 2:12 pm

I started the second page with the first panel looking like the first panel in page one. I was going to do it as a running gag, slowly getting Fuzz slightly more frazzled as it went, but I forget about it, just wanted to finish it as soon as possible.
I also decided to change the word "nothing ' to "nuffink" as I was doing it ,considering I named the comic that, and it'd look like I was sorta smart about it, even though I'm so not.
This where I wanted monkey boy (lets call him Mojo) to be introduced as the ideas man.
and with the random object out of the way ( I thought of that simpson's line straight away when I heard it, that's why I put it in the first page, I wanted to get that bart quote in there before anyone else) , then I was free to go crazy with my stroy.
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Postby Scott Fraser on Sat Jun 11, 2005 2:18 pm

Ha-ha!
Love the "Thinking Cap" gag!
Looking good!
(I too have a monkey in my story. )
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Postby mark selan on Sat Jun 11, 2005 2:54 pm

man that looks cool
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Postby practicecactus on Sat Jun 11, 2005 3:30 pm

Enter: the hot lezbo action scene..pretty self explanitory
like I said, I promissed someone I care very much about , I would , so I didn't want to dissapoint them , and plus..I may be many things, but I am not a fucking liar!
And well, I thought people would like it..who doesn't?
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Postby SpectralAesthete on Sat Jun 11, 2005 3:41 pm

And oh so true. <3
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Postby practicecactus on Sat Jun 11, 2005 3:56 pm

Needed to fill a page, so I came up with this gag page, and it helped me introduce the super hero idea, and jump straight into the next page all spandexed up.
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Postby Rosalinda on Sat Jun 11, 2005 4:11 pm

I think I love you. :D
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Postby dillon on Sat Jun 11, 2005 4:23 pm

you can almost smell those kippers while reading this.
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Postby practicecactus on Sat Jun 11, 2005 4:26 pm

I'm sure those fish are burnt to a shithouse by now..
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Postby Christian on Sat Jun 11, 2005 4:32 pm

This is really top stuff. Keep it up, man.
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Postby practicecactus on Sat Jun 11, 2005 5:26 pm

I needed to launch into the idea that Mojo was getting carried away rather quickly before I ran out of pages...and it needed a bit of violence , I think..although it's all imaginary
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Postby Edward J Grug III on Sat Jun 11, 2005 5:50 pm

Dude, you're art is fucking awesome. I wish you were going for the full 24 pages.

Maybe next year?
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Postby practicecactus on Sat Jun 11, 2005 6:05 pm

God it looks shockin..I needed to include a bit of manga for a lady friend (anything to impress pretty , young things ;) )and I was trying to think of comic styles..super hero, adult, manga, auto biographical, cartoon, ..I couldn' think of any more..so I went with ninjas to follow on with the manga idea, and for a big final action shot...I was going to include robots that shoot lazers out of their eyes, but I didn't have enough pages for that. I wanted it bang on the minimum 8...cause I'm methodically lazy like that.
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