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Postby mark selan on Sun Jun 12, 2005 10:55 am

Gentleman Cock and Slapping Monkey - gold
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Postby Pirotess on Mon Jun 13, 2005 1:25 pm

You and yer funny animals, Frase. ;)

Very snappy stuff, though! I'm beginning to see some themes emerging overall... namely fish (a given), Doug, and gay.
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Postby Owen Heitmann on Mon Jun 13, 2005 1:51 pm

Your pencils get the story across, but I wanted to see more than just two panels with your sweet inks. But no, you had to go and have an actual life and enjoy yourself. So inconsiderate.

Fairly creative way to wrap it up though.
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Postby The Intruder on Mon Jun 13, 2005 10:15 pm

Pirotess wrote: I'm beginning to see some themes emerging overall... namely fish (a given), Doug, and gay.


I thought they were unofficial themes...

Having gone out all weekend and NOT done a comic, and feeling the way I feel right now, I don't know how the hell you cranked out this gem.

But you did. And it's great.
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Postby Scott Fraser on Tue Jun 14, 2005 12:45 am

Fish, Doug and gay.
Read between the lines!

Me + Funny animals. That dosen't make me a THE Furry, does it?

Owen, I'm slowly proceeding with inking the pages now. I'll probally change that last page of text into a few more pages of sequentials. There's also an incident with a cat that I forgot to mention and may add.

Trudy, thanks for the kind words. I'm having a go at rejigging the story into something more cohesive. I'm afraid on the night the call to go out and party was too strong!
(I'm feeling pretty tip-top actually)
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Postby practicecactus on Tue Jun 14, 2005 12:48 am

mark selan wrote:Gentleman Cock and Slapping Monkey - gold

Damn htis dyslexia..I read "gentleman's cock-slapping monkey."
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Postby Patrick Alexander on Tue Jun 14, 2005 1:57 am

That's "hits dyslexia".

(Oh, and nice comic, Scott.)

(Actually I thought it was shit, but you're going to make it better, right?)
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Postby Gary Lau on Thu Jun 16, 2005 10:14 pm

Scott, this was cool! I, too, can't believe the monkey slapped you. I was waiting for you to slap it back... but I guess that was a bit too obvious!! :p And a gentleman coc--- uh, I mean rooster. Hahaha. I really like the dialogue exchanging both between you and the monkey and you and the rooster (this makes no sense if someone just rocked up and read this without reading your 24 hr comic, I know). Excellent!!
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Postby Scott Fraser on Fri Jun 17, 2005 3:05 pm

Patrick: Yeah, I'm slowly getting it down. Inking up the pages I've done and I'll probally will stretch out the last few pages. Had an idea in the shower this morning (AGAIN!) about what I can do to make it all a better story.
I think i might put the word "Cunt" in it alot and have some offensivly-inoffensive stuff that's just boring to read. That would make it better, yeah? *wink*

Gary: Thanks man. You've gotto watch those monkeys!! Fuck they can be a pain sometimes!!
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Postby David Yardin on Fri Jun 17, 2005 4:51 pm

I think i might put the word "Cunt" in it alot and have some offensivly-inoffensive stuff that's just boring to read. That would make it better, yeah? *wink*


You'd definitely get the most hits.
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Postby Scott Fraser on Sun Jun 26, 2005 7:49 pm

Finished inking the first page the other day:

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Postby practicecactus on Sun Jun 26, 2005 8:44 pm

Looks good.
..and I'm not just saying that, cause there's a bit of gratuitous nudity.
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